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.This review is from. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.Reviewer: ( ) 12:16, 9 December 2017 (UTC)Don't feel obligated but I'm looking for comments on my if you're interested. 12:16, 9 December 2017 (UTC).
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This is a cover of a song from a commercial for the Sega Dreamcast game, Chu Chu Rocket. Lyrics Chu chu rocketto Nezumi o tasukero Chu chu rocketto Neko wa kowai Chu chu rocket We gotta save the mice, baby. Chu chu rocket The cat's a scary guy. Chu chu rocket Nezumi o tasukerou Chu chu rocket. The Japanese Chu Chu Rocket commercial is the best thing ever.
Is it reasonably well written?' Lead mice into their rockets' - the use of the word 'their' raises the question of why they have rockets, also it isn't clear at this stage what the rockets do (they could be a weapon to use on the cats), how about simply 'lead mice into escape rockets'? I'm open to alternate wording.I agree that's the best way to say it, fixed Wikilink in the leadDone Wikilink; non-gamers won't know what this meansDone 'He noted there are two trends' - this is his opinion. As per i'd replace 'noted' with 'stated' or another neutral termI am bad about doing that, fixed WikilinkDone 'hook up 4 Game Boy Advances' - '4' should be spelt out as 'four'Done. Is it factually accurate and?A. Has an: There's inconsistency in the references.
I.e some publications are spelt out (PlanetDreamcast) whereas others are given with the url (www.dreamcastlive.net, sega.jp). Replace the url formatted ones.Fixed url ones I'd format ' ChuChu Rocket! Sega, 1999' withDone B. Citation to reliable sources: There's one citation needed tag.
Obviously the preceding sentence needs to be cited or removed.I cannot find a source. I think the image stands fine on its own to explain this. C.:. Is it broad in its coverage? A.: B.:.
Is it? Fair representation without bias:. Is it stable? No, etc:.
Does it contain to illustrate the topic? Images are with their, and are provided for: B. Images are provided if possible and are to the topic, and have:. Overall:Pass or Fail: Looks pretty good overall. Placing on hold until issues are addressed.
12:36, 9 December 2017 (UTC)@: Responded 16:37, 9 December 2017 (UTC)Looks good. Happy for this to pass now. 23:08, 9 December 2017 (UTC).
Sega and have just recently added a new section to their Japanese web page devoted to the upcoming online puzzle game. The web page can be accessed by browsing to.One of the first things you'll see on the page is a link for downloading a wacky television commercial Sega's cooked up for the game. We've provided the fifteen seconds of footage below for your viewing pleasure. When and if the game arrives on these shores, expect Sega of America to take a more American approach to the ads.-, IGNDC.
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